Billgar
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GC of the dayThis is a big one. Write a three line poem with syllable count 5-7-5(im not calling it a haiku as there is more to it than syllable count). It must be about the nature in the world of Nocte.
Do this and you will receive 50 GC
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Schmall
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Schmall is a short guy,
who twirls his sharp bisento,
striving to reach the sky.
Hope that works. Took a little time to get the message across while getting syllable count right
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Billgar
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Hmmm... Looking for something about "thenature in the world of Nocte"
Try again?
nice try though
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Schmall
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Lump birds are lazy
Lounging and fwuting all day
Some call it crazy
bit of a stretch really. only thing that i could ryme with lazy without using search tools
received 50GC
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Billgar
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It doesnt have to rhyme, i myself prefer when poems dont, but good job 50 GC!
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Koku
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lacrimabilis
running wild through vast plains
show peace in Nocte
received 50GC
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Billgar
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Excellent job there! I love how lacrimabilis is used! 50 GC!
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Schmall
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jeeesh. somehow i was thinking it had to ryhme. I prefer not to ryhme myself. Mostly cuz i suck at it and it takes a true natural to make a ryhme flow properly over extended amount of lines
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Beanbaker
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The forests, oceans,
Though their beauty, pure awe, yet,
Death to unfit eyes.
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Billgar
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Hmmm...good but how about something more nocte specific?
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Beanbaker
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Okay then just an edit
The forest of souls
Though its beauty, pure awe, yet,
Death to unfit eyes.
received 50GC
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Billgar
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Works fine. Good job! 50 GC!
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Archaic
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Oh Lumpbird I see
Do you like the tonsor birds
Or do you not care?
received 50 GC
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Billgar
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Nice that would be worth 50 gc very haiku too. good job!!
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